英语作文-初中作文-20400字

1 2013中考英语复习 书面表达第1集

该精品包括2010年、2011年、2012年各省市的模拟题、真题中的书面表达，既有经典的常练作文，也有与时俱进的新创新作文，都有参考范文。每一篇文章都标明了年、省市，方便会员选用。排版工整。

【2012山东济宁】

七．书面表达（共1小题，计15分）

假如你叫李华，市第三中学初三的学生。星期天你和班里的同学去康乐敬老院(old folk’s home) 参加了社区活动。请根据下面的图画的提示词语，用英语写一篇100词左右的日记。可合理想象，适当发挥。句首已给出，不计入总词数。

（一）审题

本篇作文考查的为记叙文。要求利用所给的信息列举在星期天去往敬老院的经过。然后写出你个人的观点。

（二）列举写作要点

1. 乘坐的交通工具，去往敬老院。老人见到我们的心情。

2. 在敬老院，我们为老人做的事情。我们的感受。

3. 总结：作为学生我们很喜欢参加社区活动。帮助老人是我们的职责。

（三）列举重点短语和句型

重点短语:take the school bus, help sb do sth, sweep the floor, clean the windows, clean the desk, enjoy oneself , have lunch

重点句型：We swept the floor for them, we cleaned the windows and we also cleaned the desk. And I think it’s our duty to help the old people.

【范文】

Sunday Fine

Today, we took the school bus to Kang Le old folk’s home. The old people greeted us warmly and they were very pleased to see us. We helped them do a lot of things in the old folk ’s home. We swept the floor for them, we cleaned the windows and we also cleaned the

2 desk. Some girls danced for them and we enjoyed ourselves that day. Finally, we had lunch together with the old people and the dishes were very delicious.

As the students in Grade Nine in No.3 Middle School, we like the activity very much. And I think it’s our duty to help the old people, do you think so?

【2011•河南省】

七、书面表达(15分) 刘伟，无臂钢琴演奏者。他十岁时在一次意外中失去双臂，但他并

没有放弃成为一名钢琴家的梦想。经过刻苦用脚练习弹琴，他最终

在" 中国达人秀" （China’s Got Talent）的舞台上实现了自己的梦想。请根据以上内容写一篇英语短文。

要求：

1. 简要描述刘伟的经历；

2. 谈谈从他的经历中你得到的启示；

3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience.

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Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience. He lost his arms in an accident when he was 10, but he didn't give up his dream of being a pianist. He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet. Finally he realized his dream in "China's Got Talent".

3 As a student, I've learnt a lot from his story. We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life, but we should believe that our dream will come true by working hard. No matter how hard life is, we won't fail unless we give up our hope.

【2011黑龙江绥化市】

V ．Writing （本题共15分，A 题5分，B 题10分）（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名，否则不赋分）

（A ）加假如你叫张强，在昨天下午的篮球比赛中不小心伤了左臂，医生建议你在家休息两天，因此你要向班主任赵老师请假。请根据以上信息，写一则40词左右的请假条。

Asking for leave

Dear Miss Zhao,

I am sorry to tell you that I cant go to school

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you!

Your student,

Zhang Qiang

(B)世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已成为人们沟通的桥梁，怎样才能学好英语是我们一直在求索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1. 词数：80—100词（开头以给出，不计入总词数）

2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。

How to learn English well

English is important and useful to use. How can we learn it well ? Here are my suggestions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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One possible version:

Asking for leave

May 10th

Dear Miss Zhao,

I am sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today. I hurt my left arm (1分) in the basketball match yesterday afternoon. The doctor told me to have a rest at home for two days, so I will /have to ask for two days/two-day leave. I hope I will get well and return to school soon.

Thank you!

Your student,

Zhang Qiang

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

How to learn English well

English is important and useful to use. How can we learn it well ? Here are my suggestions. There are four key points to study English: listening, speaking, reading and writing. Firstly, we should be brave to talk with others in English. Secondly, we should try to listen to all kinds of English programmes as much as possible. Thirdly, we should often read English books. When we come across a new word. We should guess its meaning through the contest first. Then look it up in the dictionary to have a check. Fourthly, we should practice our writing skills.

As long as we listen, speak, read and write more, we are sure to make remarkable progress!

5 （2010·湖北省咸宁市）--环保--低碳

为配合我市举行的“6·5世界环境日”万人骑自行车城区环游活动，请你写一篇以“Lower Carbon （低碳）, Happier Life”为主题的英语短文。（以上背景内容无需表述）

短文要点如下：

1．在6月5日自己骑自行车上学，父母骑车上班；

2．在家使用节能灯；减少洗澡淋浴时间；

3．将用过的课本留给下届学生；

4．请你就此话题补充1-2个个人做法。

要求：

1．不要逐词翻译；

2．在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名；

3．词数80左右；短文标题和首尾句已给出，不计入词数。

参考词汇：

节能灯

energy-saving lamp 用过的

used 下届 lower grades

Lower carbon, happier life

It’s our duty to save the environment.

Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

【答案】Lower carbon, happier life

It’s our duty to save the environment. I will go to school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus on June 5. And I will also ask my parents to ride bikes to work that day.

6 At home, we will use energy-saving lamps and spend less time when we are taking a shower. Don’t throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades. At the same time, I will tell my parents to take bags when they are shopping.(I will turn off the lights before leaving.)

Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

【2012恩施】

八、书面表达（共1题，计15分）

父爱如山！假设父亲节即将来临，请你借此机会给你父亲写封信，和他谈谈心里话。

写作要点： 1.父亲辛勤工作，让我受到更好的教育，过上更好的生活；

2. 父亲在学习上对我严格要求; 考试失利时，他鼓励我不放弃；遇到困难时，父亲鼓励我

笑对生活；表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。

温馨提示：

1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点，语言流畅，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；

2. 短文字数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；

3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。

Dear father,

Father’s Day is coming, I’d like to say something to you. ________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Li Hua

One possible passage ：

Dear father,

Father’s Day is coming. I，d like to say something to you.

You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told

7 me to be brave and smile at life.

You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!

Happy Fathers Day!

Yours, Li Hua

【2011江苏徐州】

七、书面表达（满分15分）

根据所给提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，可适当发挥，短文已给出的部分不计入总词数。注意：文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

Twenty years ago Sandy and Kitty were in the same class. ______________________

Later they went to different colleges. They had not seen each other then. Last week they met on the street!______________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________.

Twenty years ago Sandy and Kitty were in the same class. They studied together, sat on the same bench and became good friends. They had the same hobbies. Of course, they have some trouble. Sandy was very quiet ,but Kitty was outgoing , so when Kitty told some stories,

8 Sandy always didn’t listen carefully.

Later they went to different colleges. They had not seen each other then. Last week they met on the street! Sandy is a doctor now. She works in a famous hospital. Her husband is a doctor, too. They have a lovely daughter. She is so thin that Kitty can hardly get to know her. Kitty is a clerk in a company. She becomes thin, too. Her husband is a driver. Their son studies hard and often get good grades. They are very happy. They want to Ren Min Zoo next week. The two families will go together.

【2011内蒙古包头】

B. 按要求写作文。

请根据表格中所提供的信息，用英语写―篇日记。

活动时间

5月28日（星期六） 集合地点

学校大门口 出发时间

8:00am. 到达时间 8:30 am. 活动地点

人民公园(the People’s Park) 交通工具

自行车 活动内容 上午 做游戏

中午 野餐(picnic)

下午 拍照片；参观动物园

返回时间 5:00 pm.

注意：1. 内容必须包括表格中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。（文中不得出现真实姓名或校名）

2. 词数：80左右。（开头已给出，不记人总词数）

Saturday, May, 28th

It was fine. I went for an outing with my classmates today.

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9 One possible version:

Saturday, May, 28th

It was fine. I went for an outing with my classmates today.

At 8:00, we met at the school gate and then set off for the People’s Park. The bicycle ride took us half an hour.

The sun was shining and there were many people in the park. In the morning, we played all kinds of games. After the picnic at noon, we took many pictures in the afternoon. Before we went back at 5:00, we spent about one hour visiting the zoo.

Although I’m a little tired, I felt very happy.

（2010·江苏省镇江市）

请仔细阅读上图，对90后学生普遍具备的优点进行阐述（至少3点），可适当发挥（例如：We are usually fair. We always treat others equally.)。另外，作为一名90后学生，请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，列举至少2点不足之处进行描述。最后，请根据你自己的感悟，对即将开始初中生活的新生提出你的建议。

具体要求：

1 内容包括至少3个优点、2个不足之处和1个建议，可适当发挥。

2 括号内所给例句不得使用。

3 不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

4 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。

5 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名。

As post 90s students, we have so many advantages.

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【答案】One possible version：

10 As post 90s students，we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble，we always give him or her a hand. We are also energetic. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class. In addition，we are abviously imaginative. We always try something new and do everything differently.

On the other hand，we also have some disadvantages. To tell you the truth，some of us ar a little impolite. Sometimes we can t express our opinions in a correct ways. What s more ，we are so careless that we often make some mistakes in our studies and lives.

Overall ，as post 90s students who will enter a middle school ，I think you need to get used to school life as quickly as you can. You should work hard every day and take an active part in all kinds of activities to improve your abilities. Boys and girls，the future is up to us to createe.

【2012山东东营】

八、书面表达（共１题，计20分）

你在求学的过程中肯定遇到过很多好老师，你最喜欢哪位呢？请你以The Teacher I Like Best为题, 用英语写一篇短文，参加美国杂志Weekly Reader的征文活动。

内容可涉及：他（她）是谁、教什么学科；你喜欢他（她）的原因。可以适当发挥。

要求：1、80-100词；

2、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名，老师姓名统一使用Mr./Mrs./Miss XX ，例如：Mr. Ma 。

A possible version:

The Teacher I Like Best

Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school. She had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc.

Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.

11 Thanks to Mrs. Li, I started to love English. I love Mrs. Li and her class.

【2011湖南湘潭】

书面表达 （计10分）

假如你是图片中的人物，请你根据图画内容及所给提示，完成下面的日记。字数不少于

20.

June 7th Tuesday Sunny

I got up late this morning. My alarm clock didn't work. 参考范文One possible version

June 7th Tuesday Sunny

I got up late this morning. My alarm clock didn't work. When I woke up, it was 7:10. So

I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop without breakfast. By the time I got there, I missed The school bus because it had already gone. So I had to walk to school. Finally, when I got

to school, it was already 9:10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework.

I found I had left it at home. What a bad day it was!

八、【2011•广西柳州】

书面表达（本大题共1题，共10分）

假设你是一名中学生，名叫李华，曾经到英国学习、生活了三个月。在那期间，你住在大卫(David)

家中。现在学习已结束，你刚回到家，特意给大卫写一封70词左右的英文信，内容包括以下方面：

表达谢意

感谢大卫及其家人对你的照顾。 难忘的事 1． 大卫帮助你学习英语，带你去参观了许多地方；

2． 大卫的父母在你生病时送你去医院，给你做好吃的食物。

12 学习收获

提高了英语水平，更多地了解了英国的文化。 发出邀请 邀请大卫及其家人到你家作客。

要求：1. 信件内容要包含所给的提示信息，可适当发挥。

2. 信的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

参考词汇：culture(文化),invite(邀请)

Dear David,

I’ve just got back home. I want to say “Thank you” most at the moment. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

参考范文：

Dear David,

I’ve just got back home. I want to say “Thank you ”most at the moment. During my stay with you r family, I was well looked after. You helped me with my English and showed me around many places. When I was ill, your parents sent me to the hospital and prepared delicious food for me. so I got well soon.

With your help, my English has greatly improved and I ’ve learned more about your culture. Thank you for what you have done!

I’d like to invite you to visit my family soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

（2010·浙江省卷）

请你选择最喜欢的一门学科，以My favourite Subject 为题，写一篇短文，说说喜欢这门学科的理由，以及平时是怎样学习的。

13 要求：1. 词数80左右

2.叙事清楚，语句通顺，语意连贯。

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

【答案】My favourite Subject

English is my favourte subject because English is used widely in the world，especially in Yiwu ，a city with so many foreigners. What’s more，I like it because my English teacher is kind and friendly to me.

In order to learn English well，I read English aloud every morning and listen to the teacher carefully in class. After class ，I often wacth English programs and keep an English diary every day.

In a word, I love English and I will continue to learn it better.

【2012四川乐山】

第四节 书面表达（满分15分

今年的3.15晚会曝光了北京一麦当劳店将过期食品改换包装再次出售一事，引来舆论哗然，食品卫生安全再次成为人们关注的焦点。作为一名中学生消费者，该如何维护自己的权益，吃到放心的食品？请你根据下面提供的要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇80词左右的短文，并谈谈自己的看法。

1. 买食品前检查生产日期，查看是否过期；

2. 识别食品是否新鲜或变质；

3. 购物以后索取并保管好发票；

4. 发现问题食品以后，拨打12315或向当地消费者协会寻求帮助。

注意：

1. 词数：80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 应覆盖所有要点：可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3. 参考词汇：date 日期；overdue 过期的；go bad 变质；invoice 发票；Consumer Association

消费者协会。

Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald’s restaurant in Beijing, the safety of food has become a hot topic. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests?

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One Possible Version:

Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald ’s restaurant in Beijing, the safety of food has become a hot topic. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests?

First, before buying food, we need to check the date and see whether it is overdue. Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad. After we pay for the food, we should get the invoice and take good care of it. Last but not the least, if we find there ’s a problem with the food, call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help.

Food safety is of great importance in our daily life. In my opinion, the government should take action to punish the producers and companies that went against consumers’ rights. On the other hand, we should learn to be wise consumers.

【2011乌鲁木齐】

书面表达 （满分15分）

学校将要举行演讲比赛，请以My Dream 为题写一篇参赛演讲稿。注意：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校。 2.词数：80歌左右。 3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

My dream

Hi ，

everyone___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

One possible version: Hi ， everyone。Everybody has his dream job. I also have my dream job. My dream is to work for foreign tourists as a tour guide.

Why do I want to be a tour guide? First of all, I‘m an outgoing girl, and I like doing some exciting things. Maybe being a tour guide is the best choice. If I become a tour guide, I can travel all around China, and know more about our country. Then I will tell the foreign

15 tourists about our colorful history. Second, I like making friends. If I work as a tour guide, I can make a lot of friends all over the world. This may be great. Perhaps someday my foreign friends will ask me to visit their countries. I really like to go to their countries to know something about their culture. What’s more, I like singing. Singing English songs is my favorite. I believe I will be popular with foreign tourists. Their trip will be excellent. Now, I am still a middle school student. My job now is to work hard in school. Then I’ll g o to university to learn something about being a tour guide. I’m sure I can be a qualified tour guide in the future

【2011天津】

假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事情让你印象深刻。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。

要点：

1. 一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；

2. 你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边；

3. 孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；

4. 你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。

参考词汇：孙子 grandson 空水瓶 empty bottle 保持„„干净 keep„„clean

要求： 1. 词数：80 – 100个。

2. 日记开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

June 3, Friday Fine

On my way home on the bus, I saw __________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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June 3, Friday Fine

On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and a violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus.

When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.

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（2010·四川省卷）

为配合我市“礼仪宜宾(Charm Yibin)”活动的开展，某学校开展以“How to behave well？”为主题的英语作文比赛，请你以一名初中学生的身份写一篇60--80词的短文参赛。

内容包括：1. 守时，不说脏话；2. 礼貌待人，热心助人；3. 遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4. „„ 注意：1. 文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2. 内容可适当扩展。

How to behave well?

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17 【答案】 How to behave well?

As a student in Yibin, we should behave well. First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules. Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.